Monday, December 5, 2011

Judith, a Hanukkah ode

Judith, tall as The Hammer, with a heart
as big as her nation and as hard as
the steel she used to hew the head from the
proud shoulders of the Seleucid tyrant,
climbed the hills of Judea in bare feet
and tattered robes until her fingers bled
in the dry, dusty rock, to escape the
destruction of her home and the greedy
grasp of soldiers fed on the bounty of
the land and the lust of their loins.  She sought
the safety of the free people, hidden
among the crags and crevices of the
devious, dark hills, who had long strived to
remove the offending armies from their
homes and villages in the formerly
fertile milk and honey valleys below.
Judith slipped unseen between sentries who
had spotted Seleucid spies a mile off,
and entered the camp with head unbowed, knee
unbent, covered in mud and dust and her
own blood, and the free people stopped to see
a woman where they might before have seen
a girl.  She came before her cousin, The
Hammer himself, and with reckless courage
demanded to do her part, to avenge
their dead, to take up a sword and shield and
fight against the Seleucid invader.
She would do whatever he asked of her
so long as she could strike back at those who
murdered her father, raped her mother, and
ended her childhood before its own time.
In his wisdom, The Hammer bade her to
tend the wounded, to feed the hungry, and
to help make the people strong, to do all
this and smile to keep up the courage of
the people.  Judith lowered her eyes and
nodded as though she acquiesced, but her
heart raged against any wisdom that would
relegate her to menial work when
her warrior’s heart called for blood.  All that
long day, she tended the wounded,
fed the hungry, and girded warriors
in their worn, dented, and bloodied armor, 
and smiled to keep up the courage of the
people, and in the darkest hour of
the night, she slipped unseen from the camp of
the free people.
She sought out the camp of the Seleucid
army, a camp so large it covered an
entire valley that once had fed thousands,
but was now a desolate waste of men,
horse, and disease.  She shortened her skirts, bared
her legs, and slipped unseen past the sentries
who kept a watchful eye for raids from the
brave warriors of the free people.  She
came before the tent of Holofernes,
the great general of the Seleucid
army, the tyrant of her people, and
offered herself to him for a price.  His
hungry eyes saw a beautiful girl,
black curly hair, eyes soft and brown as a
warm embrace, full moist lips, firm breasts, strong arms, 
dressed to enflame his soul, haughty and proud,
a girl who could only be conquered by
one such as a king, and his heart swelled with
ambition.  He beat his ravenous men
down to forge a path for her to approach.
He brought her in his tent for refreshment
and she came willingly, a demure smile
playing on her red lips at odds with her
wanton dress.  He offered her wine, gold, and
jewels, but she declined such treasures.  “I
wish only to serve you, great general,
and welcome you as a guest to my land.”
She prepared for him a feast of many
delicacies of the land.  She helped him
remove his strong and impenetrable
armor, and massaged his mighty shoulders.
He ate his fill of fine foods, and drank wine
to prepare himself for the task ahead.
He sighed the contented sigh of a man
who would be king of a conquered land, and
he grew thoughtful and sleepy with dreams of
crowns and scepters replacing armor and
maces.
As his eyes grew misty with ambition
and lust, Judith hefted the general’s
great sword above her head and swung it with
all her considerable might.  The sword
lodged in his neck in a spray of scarlet
rain as she let out a grunt.  She would seem
to be weeping ruby tears if not for
the feral grin on her face as she heaved
and pulled the sword free.  His dying body
fell as a great oak falls before the swing
of the woodsman’s axe.  She stood above his
twitching corpse and hacked away until the
great general’s head popped free, skittering
across the richly carpeted floor, gasps
of exertion escaping her lips in
ragged regularity.
The guards outside the great general’s tent
smiled conspiratorially to each
other, thinking, foolishly, that their lord
was satisfying a trollop with his
manhood.  Judith was satisfied, it is
true, but not in any way that would have
pleased Holofernes had he been alive.
As the camp settled down that night, Judith
wrapped the head in a sturdy sack from which
came part of the general’s final feast.
She disposed of her bloody attire, and
dressed herself in the great general’s day
clothes.  She slipped past the sleeping guards and out
of the Seleucid camp with her prize, and
did not spare a backward glance as she once
again made the treacherous journey up
the hills of Judea.
As the sun crested the ridge, Judith slipped
unseen past the sentries who sought her out
with worried eye on the order of her
cousin, The Hammer, and entered the camp
of the free people, dressed in a man’s clothes
with a man’s blood staining her girlish face,
head unbowed, knee unbent, and the people
silently stood aside to let her pass
with her heavy burden.  Again, Judith
came before her wise cousin, The Hammer.
“I come to you with a gift,” she said, “which
I think will inspire the wounded to
tend themselves, which will feed the hungry with
hope for a future free of invaders,
and make our people strong.”  And then she pulled
the disembodied head of General
Holofernes from the sack and held it
high, a look of surprise frozen on his
great warrior face, and she smiled to keep
up the courage of the people.

1 comment:

  1. This is great. I especially like the line:

    "She sought
    the safety of the free people, hidden
    among the crags and crevices of the
    devious, dark hills."

    Hope your family gets over their bugs. (Anna from the library)

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